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Huh.

There were only a few motion tweens set to some poorly timed and rhymed poetry. Seeing as it is currently number 3 in the top fifty, I really expected some...I dunno...animation?

So...

It's Robin Williams in the movie "One Hour Photo" where he is dreaming that his eyes basically explode, right? I agree that it might find an audience at YTMND.

Interesting

A little melodramatic, but well done. Seems like Owen's voice is too loud at the beginning, and Darth Maul's accent (the animator's voice?) threw me off.

Also, continuity-wise, Luke is only three years old. How did Owen and Obi-Wan turn into old men so quickly?

Anyway, nice work.

Hilarious!

Absolutely hilarious cartoon, David Firth...I mean..."Jerry Jackson."

Great, but too large.

I really enjoyed it, but I'm thinking if you had published it with ANY compression on your audio (80kbps maybe?) then the file size would be less than half of what it is.

Also, did you intend for the song to end with the final impact? Because on my computer the music ended 5-10 seconds before the animation was over.

Anyway, great movement, great style, great choice of song. Thanks for sharing it with us.

DarkKenjie responds:

ya its running slow for me to, I will try and make it smaller ^_^, thanx for the input

Spelling and grammar

I was going to correct your spelling and grammar, but then I noticed that there was at least one spelling or grammar mistake every single time you put words on the screen. So let's just start with this: Every time you used the word "than" you meant to say "then". And you had a tendency to change tense in the middle of a sentence. But oh well. It was kinda funny.

Darn you!

I gave you a 5...but I wanted to give you a ZERO out of jealousy!

You're good. Great job.

Errors

You didn't embed whatever font you used for your text, so half of your words went off the edge and couldn't be read. I don't think they were going to really be worth reading anyway, but I thought you should know your Flash was screwed up.

Interesting...

Was that supposed to be funny? Sad? Pathetic? Or just true? I couldn't tell. Personally, I find the whole 40 Days of Purpose thing to be annoying, but I know some people have really gotten a lot out of it.

Anyway, good work. The animation was VERY processor intensive, though. Really choked up on my PC. When you put a lot of Flash 8 blur effects in at once, it'll do that.

Refreshing!

How nice to see a movie on Newgrounds that is hilarious without trying to be offensive. It's like stand up comedy...the really good ones can make you laugh without swearing, making fun of religion or politics, or telling dirty jokes.

Good job!

David Rutledge @CaptainSid

Age 48, Male

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Ada, Oklahoma

Joined on 3/2/06

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